Battle Verse...What do you think?

Honestly man ur "FLOW IS JUST BROKEN" and ur *spitting out letters* after "BLOW-ING THE POSTMAN"!!!! I jus *step up to the stage* and I'll "SHOW U THE MOTION" say ya shit wouldn't *move ppl* if u was "THROWING A SLOGAN" he's jus a *mouthpiece* of his crew "GROWING TO A SPOKESMAN" I recommend u take a *positive step* to "LEARN HOW TO BATTLE" or he's gonna be *crying for joints* after I "BURN UP HIS ANKLE" this guy so wack he bought a *MacBook* and didn't "EARN UP THE APPLE" so as soon as he *lays the track* I'll make sure it "TURNS IN TO GRAVEL" putting *for sale stake* in from of his house ima leave ya to "YEARN HOW TO GAMBLE"!!! "CAUSE I LIKE TO RECYCLE MY BARS FROM LETSBEEF"

Hey homie- its a good verse- but dont stray away from structure, u know better than that- dont just throw 5 syllables up- make sure it rhymes syllable for syllable homie-

Pretty cool. Some dope punchez.. multiez were pretty cool as well.

intricate_skillz wrote:

Hey homie- its a good verse- but dont stray away from structure, u know better than that- dont just throw 5 syllables up- make sure it rhymes syllable for syllable homie-

thx for the tip fam. appreciate it

..sWORDz! wrote:

Pretty cool. Some dope punchez.. multiez were pretty cool as well.

thx homie. appreciate it.